Wednesday, February 22, 2012

A Fool For Love




In and out, ‘round and about… every pass seems wrong.
I jump in, I fade out; hope spins a tale never realized.
What do you call one who hears but doesn’t listen, and who sees but doesn’t understand?
The fool.  The fool inside.

6 comments:

  1. The heart is a fool, isn't it? :) Nicely done.

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  2. very introspective. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Yep. No know no fool sillier than the one in my head. Concise writing.

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  4. I like the way this is constructed like a riddle. The jumping in and fading out is like a heartbeat.
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  5. Thank you for joining up to this week's Trifecta Challenge. We're happy to have you aboard. I like the brevity of this, and its pacing. It's definitely got a rhythm to it, like something you should be tapping your foot to. Nicely done. Hope to see you back for the weekend challenge.

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  6. Love does make us do crazy things.

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